Nicole: create css font colors for h1/h2 match homepage
Do to all types
Page 105 – Change to “Do you still recall all five meal courses (or phases)?
Key questions – Title is too green – match better???
Attribution page – Directory of content contributions
Chapter Titles seem crowded – In book there is space around everything — can we add space above?
We are going to check how space below each page would look … hold off on intro changes of space below …
Make all instances of “To the right” to “To the bottom”
“Quick Links” link – Color Wheel, Principles, etc
Add note at beginning of the book to explain that page numbers are sometimes combined. All pages match the printed book. “How to use this book.”
Whole book
All pages
xVisual Focus logo should be larger
xAdd chapter title to the sidebar (Chapter 3 • Formulate a Plan) match style bottom right placement (bold, slab, but not italics)
[NEED] Try putting the dots larger – under the nav on the right (size of the circle in the magnifying glass)
All icons in the book need to be bigger – Double or triple the size
All horizontal rules need to be gold – spacing??
Too small on chapter sidebars (double the size)
Put arrow on page numbers
(check review page … touching? Try putting white under 67)
Try putting attribution on images (small, turned vericle – right side — if too hard do under on the right)
Sidebar – make second text centered verticly
Add visual Focus with five dots (logo) in the page bar (to the right)
??????Left bar chapter title in small caps on some computers?????
Gotham Bold for table of contents
“Unlock the secrets” in all caps ,,,, shouldn’t be!
xPage 14 – website in all lowercase
Top align chapter title text
Paid Membership Pro – “1 year membership”
xsubscriber bar change to tan on back of book
xmore space below “return to your account”
xChapter 1 image – chapter 4 color
xMake Page 3 glasses the favicons
Cover – Remove space above and below photoshop mockup
Front page two large images crop naturally again
Intro
Focus Process Image linkable?
Page 1 – More space under “Caryn Esplin”
Sidebar – space before •
Page bar – Book title image needs to be more crisp (possibly use the fonts)
Page 2/3 – Add Megan Kelly and Nicole Nugent to content contributors — add Eric Lybbert as the web developer (Managing Website Director?)
Page 2 – Put content Contributors on right side (second column)
Make Page 3 it’s own page
Page 6 – Match page space above and below in the book
Page 7 – add more space on the bottom — h2s are in all caps – shouldn’t be — page numbers don’t align — Pie icon needs to be flipped
Pages 8-11 – All on one page
Page 14 – Delete “Students can stay up … “, move other text to the bottom left (separate paragraph),
— One large paragraph on the left needs to be three
— Girl on right column alone
Page 15 – More space under image
Changes on Chapter 1
The Need For Visual Focus — not in all caps
Body copy too small?
Chapter 2
[NEED] Mute the orange on chapter 2 (more gray … black in it)
xNo small caps in the title right bar – regular case
xChapter title “Chapter 2” drop shadow
xPage 32 & 33 Image font is wrong –
xPage 34 number is wrong (21)
xPicture missing on page 35
xPage 36 – list make two columns – No leading – tighter
xBold text on page 37 (Needs a different font)
xPage 37 – “Review” should be different font and not all caps
x– dotted line closer to Review
xAll images crossing two pages need to cross three columns –
xRecrop image on page 38/39
Chapter 3
xHyperlink principles in title section
No small caps on title right bar – regular case – bolder title
xSubtitles in title right bar shouldn’t be all caps
title right bar – Color needs a little more pink in it
xTry sizing “Don’t Skip the Appetizer” to fit on one line
xPage 44/45 make image left aligned
xPage 47 – Pull quote larger, more leading, color more gold – little bit
xPage 48 – Make image two columns on the right – All text on left
xPage 49 – (Make own page) Image span three columns – 80% (See the whole page on screen)
????Page 51 – proximity from list and bottom of page off
xFix Principle titles and sub titles
xPage 52 – Lightbulb overlaps text (Some will — watch image in books)
????Page 53 – Bottom padding not consistent
xPage 54 – Should match page 59 (Exercise)
????Is the spacing at the bottom all too close????
Fix Key Questions
Fix last page number at the bottom
Chapter 4
page 65 – crop image (1 inch above above cup) – twice as much as on page 67
Page 66 – “A Note about Using” should be gotham
Page 68 – Bold “Review” change font
Page 70-71 – Top align right column with “Organize and Positinve space”
Page 71 – “YAlex” remove the Y — Italizaize book
Page 74 across all pages – “Respect white space” should be bolder (different from book)
– “White space is your friend” larger and bolder
Page 76 – Change “Inadequate white space” down to be black
Page 82 & 83 – Split to two pages
Page 89 – Captions on images should be tighter — do across the board
92/93 – Center and shrink down a bit
Page 94 – “Arrange elements …” — twice that size and bolder
Page 97- “Avoid the overuse of center alignment” add double the space above
Page 100 – White space above page – don’t touch page 99
Page 100 – Wrong page number 100 to 101
Chapter 5
Page 104 – Blockquote span two columns above list
Page 105 – Change to “Do you still recall all five meal courses (or phases)?
Page 108 – Sub heading size
Page 108 – “Principle 1: …” is wrong color – Should match left bar
Page 112 – Two columns – image to the right
Page 113 – Two columns – image to the right
Page 114 – Make image match size of 113 — all text on left
Page 115 – Image to the right and make larger (113 reference)
Page 116 – Size image down so the small text is smaller than the
Page 117 – Under Photographics logo it is the wrong heading
Page 119 – “Used in this Book!” should be a script — Take different screenshot of this page image — wrong fonts
Page 120 – Julie Peterson reference on images
Page 123 – Images need to be resaved — “Remember, color, has value” wrong size, font
Page 124 – “Answers to the previous exerciese” wrong font and needs to be bolder
Page 127 – “Addative colors” and “subtractive colors” needs to be bolder
Page 128 – “Hue – Saturation – Brightness” Not all caps
Page 129 – “Each color wheel …” needs to be brown
Page 130 – Sub title should be changed with previous alteration
Page 133 – Lines around color wheels — more space between color wheels
Page 141 – Picture and text relationship
Page 142-143 – Number images
Page 144-145 – Match order of images
Page 151 – “Isn’t it fun to mix colors?” much bolder
Page 151 – “”Exercise: Cyan to lavendar to gray” remove “Exercise” – Should be sans serif and bolder
Quick review – Key principles headings – All slab serif – only first word is bold – A little bigger text
Chapter 6
Page 173 – 1/4 – 2/4 – 1/4 — Missing text at the need of top left paragraph
Page 174 – Put on own image
Page 179 – Break left paragraph into many – “Page, Arizona.”, “to the focal-point- the light.” — put two paragraphs in each column
Page 180/181 – Put on same page
Quick Review – Principle names – change to archer-bold,serif !important – just name
Chapter 7
Page186 – Move quote to two columns under other paragraph
Page 193 – Remove “You may download a printable …”
Page 207 – Nicole is going to find an image for this
Page 210 and 211 – combine
Quick Review – Step 1. Make Ovservations – not aligned